Ehh

6 for your first, but not very good. Your drop was really muddy, and not heavy at all. I also didn't like your bass cutting out every few seconds of playing. Also, your build to the 'drop' (If you can even call it that, more like a slide!) was not building at all. Try sucking up the sound and bursting out. Add a bunch of synthetic sounds together with the same beat but a different sound. +2 for effort, +2 for first try, +2 for decent track. Also, don't use the FL Voices, they're pretty lame.
But keep trying, you'll be good one day.